The Incident
March 22nd, 2009 by amitbms
loved field trips, especially one that was on the last day of school and which
would go 3 weeks into summer break. Everyone took a glance over at the
parking lot as they heard David and his mom drive over with their monstrous,
green Toyota Van. Anyone could tell that was David because he had the
blondest hair that could shine brighter than a light bulb in a murky cave.
Everybody knew him as a tall, but lean kid with sky blue eyes and the popular
dude at his school. He always wore his green A’s hat, tight Levi’s Jeans, any
shirt within reach, and his custom designed Nike shoes.
The field trip supervisor, Mr. Magert, was going to be watching over all the
students for the next 3 weeks.
“Oh my gosh Mr. Magert is so annoying” whispered kids while snickering to
each other.
While waiting for the last few kids to arrive, all the kids started talking about
what they were going to do over the vacation and how much fun they’re
going to have at Camp Watacki. They all boarded there school’s green and
white school bus, which were their school colors. The bus was old and rusty
and the windows made a screeching sound when moved. The tires were
barely bumped to requirements, the leather seats were coarse and springs
rose out of the cushions for your back. The ride to Camp Watacki would be
about a 4 hour ride but the kids sang songs which was weird because they
rode trip. He decided to sleep considering he got almost no sleep last night
by staying up with his best friend Paul playing videos games and reminiscing
about all the excitement the camp was going to have. Such as, swimming,
baseball, soccer, volleyball, camp fires with all his school friends. David had
no care in the world at that time and thought summer was going to be a
major pain he gotten in his head. He could feel the blood pumping in his had
and the aggravation of the screams of his fellow classmates just made it
worse. He stared out of the broken window with chipped glass in every corner
of the frame. They were hanging over a colossal hill on the side of what
appeared to be an abandoned road located somewhere in the mountains.
Blood gushed down the side of the bus drivers head as she laid on the
floor…dead. The screams began to increase in volume as the bus tipped inch
by inch closer to falling and losing their lives. The medal bars of the side of
the road had gotten caught into one of the pipes on the bottom of the bus
and was the only thing keeping them from a horrific and painful death.
Everyone was in too much shock to do anything or even move a muscle.
“Oh my god, oh my god…were gonna’ die!!” screamed David and few others
in the back of the bus.
No was moving because they were being over cautious trying not to upset the
balance of the bus until suddenly the stainless steel bar broke!
“Ahhhhhh!!!” went the screams of all the students including Mr. Magert.
The yells of the students made it impossible to hear what was going on. The
bus toppled down the bumpy hill bending and breaking in all places. Through
exploded and the kids sitting in the middle of the bus started coughing and
some went into unconsciousness. The bus had split into two parts and had
gone in different directions as the bus plummeted towards the tree filled
jungle of hell.
wobbly then Jell-O. His head slowly arose from the damp mud on the floor of
this vast jungle. Seeing double, David couldn’t stand upright. He tilted side to
side trying to keep his balance and finally got a grasp on a nearby tree
branch to keep his balance. He glared around and saw no one. No bus, no
students, no Mr. Magert. Tears strolled down the side of his cheek while
trying to figure out what had happened. He began to lay on the floor in the
fetal position crying louder than an infant without his mother. He had no idea
how he was going to survive or get out of this crazy maze of a jungle. David
had cried himself to sleep thinking he would never see any of his friends
again or his loved ones.
Next morning, David woke up with sick feeling in his stomach. He had built
up the confidence to look around to see any evidence of what had happened
to all the students. No tracks of the bus or signs of any explosion. The air
reeked of a retched smell of old, sweaty gym socks. Ignoring the smell, David
started walking around when suddenly a wild dear looking animal popped
out. The animal charged David with its vicious horns which resembled the
ones on a rhino. David dove out of its path and into a bush. David scrunched
his body into a ball trying to make himself small so the deer like creature
couldn’t find him.
Note:Still working on story.
* The spacing went wierd as I published it for some reason.
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