The Incident
March 22nd, 2009 by amitbms
loved field trips, especially one that was on the last day of school and which
would go 3 weeks into summer break. Everyone took a glance over at the
parking lot as they heard David and his mom drive over with their monstrous,
green Toyota Van. Anyone could tell that was David because he had the
blondest hair that could shine brighter than a light bulb in a murky cave.
Everybody knew him as a tall, but lean kid with sky blue eyes and the popular
dude at his school. He always wore his green A’s hat, tight Levi’s Jeans, any
shirt within reach, and his custom designed Nike shoes.
The field trip supervisor, Mr. Magert, was going to be watching over all the
students for the next 3 weeks.
“Oh my gosh Mr. Magert is so annoying” whispered kids while snickering to
each other.
While waiting for the last few kids to arrive, all the kids started talking about
what they were going to do over the vacation and how much fun they’re
going to have at Camp Watacki. They all boarded there school’s green and
white school bus, which were their school colors. The bus was old and rusty
and the windows made a screeching sound when moved. The tires were
barely bumped to requirements, the leather seats were coarse and springs
rose out of the cushions for your back. The ride to Camp Watacki would be
about a 4 hour ride but the kids sang songs which was weird because they
rode trip. He decided to sleep considering he got almost no sleep last night
by staying up with his best friend Paul playing videos games and reminiscing
about all the excitement the camp was going to have. Such as, swimming,
baseball, soccer, volleyball, camp fires with all his school friends. David had
no care in the world at that time and thought summer was going to be a
major pain he gotten in his head. He could feel the blood pumping in his had
and the aggravation of the screams of his fellow classmates just made it
worse. He stared out of the broken window with chipped glass in every corner
of the frame. They were hanging over a colossal hill on the side of what
appeared to be an abandoned road located somewhere in the mountains.
Blood gushed down the side of the bus drivers head as she laid on the
floor…dead. The screams began to increase in volume as the bus tipped inch
by inch closer to falling and losing their lives. The medal bars of the side of
the road had gotten caught into one of the pipes on the bottom of the bus
and was the only thing keeping them from a horrific and painful death.
Everyone was in too much shock to do anything or even move a muscle.
“Oh my god, oh my god…were gonna’ die!!” screamed David and few others
in the back of the bus.
No was moving because they were being over cautious trying not to upset the
balance of the bus until suddenly the stainless steel bar broke!
“Ahhhhhh!!!” went the screams of all the students including Mr. Magert.
The yells of the students made it impossible to hear what was going on. The
bus toppled down the bumpy hill bending and breaking in all places. Through
exploded and the kids sitting in the middle of the bus started coughing and
some went into unconsciousness. The bus had split into two parts and had
gone in different directions as the bus plummeted towards the tree filled
jungle of hell.
wobbly then Jell-O. His head slowly arose from the damp mud on the floor of
this vast jungle. Seeing double, David couldn’t stand upright. He tilted side to
side trying to keep his balance and finally got a grasp on a nearby tree
branch to keep his balance. He glared around and saw no one. No bus, no
students, no Mr. Magert. Tears strolled down the side of his cheek while
trying to figure out what had happened. He began to lay on the floor in the
fetal position crying louder than an infant without his mother. He had no idea
how he was going to survive or get out of this crazy maze of a jungle. David
had cried himself to sleep thinking he would never see any of his friends
again or his loved ones.
Next morning, David woke up with sick feeling in his stomach. He had built
up the confidence to look around to see any evidence of what had happened
to all the students. No tracks of the bus or signs of any explosion. The air
reeked of a retched smell of old, sweaty gym socks. Ignoring the smell, David
started walking around when suddenly a wild dear looking animal popped
out. The animal charged David with its vicious horns which resembled the
ones on a rhino. David dove out of its path and into a bush. David scrunched
his body into a ball trying to make himself small so the deer like creature
couldn’t find him.
Note:Still working on story.
* The spacing went wierd as I published it for some reason.
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Operation Dingler
February 12th, 2009 by amitbms
As he popped through the window and plunged to the ground he missed a step and his dark black hair, brown eyes, and short midget body slammed into the ground.
“Holy cheese, it’s Fabio Dingler!” screamed Chuck.
“You will not catch me Dingler!’ screamed Chuck as he flew out of the room with his stainless steel jet pack while the bottom of his full bodied black coat got burned and his black top hat, with a green stripe across it, fell off.
Fabio could do nothing but watch as Chuck escaped and swooped through the air like acrobats zip through hoops. Fabio’s red Nike shirt was waving in the air and his blue Levi Jeans had gotten filthy. Fabio walked home wondering why Chuck would need that scepter in the first place.
Chuck was Fabio’s mortal enemy ever since he fad foiled his plans to take control of Pandas and use them as servants. He was confused why Chuck would try to get back into the life of crime as an evil scientist and villain after he had been prisoned in jail for it, yet he was scrawny as ever.
That morning as he slowly crawled out of bed he couldn’t keep his eyes open for more than 3 seconds without blinking his eyes and falling into a deep trance. He had school so he had no option but to wake up and get ready for the day. Fabio would be slow in the morning so his mother always yelled at him to hurry up and get ready but that didn’t stop him. 25 minutes in the shower, 5 minutes to put clothes on, 5 minutes to brush, 3 minutes to use the bathroom,7 minutes to groom himself, and 8 minutes to eat breakfast. His daily routine never changed.
Honk Honk! The bus was already here, Fabio dropped his spoon and sprinted as fast as an Olympic runner. There he met up with Chester, his best friend since the 2nd grade (6 years now). He had dirty blond hair, light brown eyes, and a clean, white smile that you could spot from space. As they exchanged words the bell had rung and they had to go to class. Fabio’s teacher, Ms. Laverd, said that there projects were due tomorrow and as usual Fabio was procrastinating until the last possible moment to turn it in. Nothing interesting happened throughout lunch and the day moved as slow as a snail can slither a mile.
6th period and still nothing…then all of a sudden BAM! A loud crashed had been heard by the whole school and the fire alarm had been rung.
“Help, help!” yelled the old janitor who had wrinkly skin and look like he should be retired, as he tried to get a fire extinguisher to get rid of the fire that was spreading near the main office.
As all the kids rushed to the flashing exit sign indicating the exit door, Fabio snuck off from the rest of the pack of animals with a real sly look on his face. Fabio would have never done such a sort of thing being a goody-to shoes, but ever since the incidence last year where he came across some secret agents from the G.O.A.T (greatly, over-achieving, teens) association in a comic book fair who then asked him to become a member of their spy organization, it was his responsibility to look out for these kind of dangers and figure out who’s behind them.
Fabio’s jacket’s zipper got caught as he try to reveal his secret agent tights underneath. The yellow and orange colors could blind a whole town of people when Fabio had gotten the rest of his clothes off by ripping them into shreds. He realized he had nothing to wear afterwards as always he was never thinking ahead. As Fabio dashed over to the 2″ thick, bullet proof, shatter resistant doors he realized they were locked. Suddenly, an idea came to him and remembered seeing a movie where a spy was going through the vents to see what the bad guys were up to. Swoosh and Snap went the grappling hook as it clenched the steel plating of the vents! Getting impatient by watching the hook slowly pick him up he switched the copper coated knob to high speed. Thump went Fabio’s head into the ceiling! His long blond hair suddenly rose up as a bump formed onto his head. One hand slipped off the hook and Fabio looked down. He was 20 feet up in the air as was beginning to quake a little, more like tremble in fear now as his grip from his second hand began to loosen.
In those 6 seconds he was in the air he had a flash back and was reminded about what his master always said to him, Just keep going. He reached up and got his hand back on the rope and moved about 8 inches, and then the other, and then again until he finally reached the top drowning in his own sweat. He squeezed into the vent as happy as ever that he had conquered his fear of heights. Clrump thump went his body as he urged to move forward. Clrump thump again as he tried to move forward.
“Oh no, I’m stuck!” yelled Fabio trying to get some one’s attention.
He now realized that he was trapped inside a burning building with no one to hear his screams of pain and uncomfort. The smoke rose up into the vents make him cough intensely as he began to slip into a state of unconsciousness. He woke up in the arms of some fire fighter. He had pointy black hair, a few wrinkles on his forehead, bushy eyebrows, and smelled like the back end of a skunk.
“You okay kid?” said the strange firemen with a deep voice that soothed Fabio’s pain.
“Yeah, I’m ok,” Fabio said replying back to the firemen’s question.
“We found you in the fetal position on the floor near a janitor’s cart, hugging a mop.”
“Well thanks again officer…” said Fabio trying to read the man’s badge with his blurry eyes, probably from the smoke.
While he was trying to get up on his feet he heard the Vice Principal whisper to the policemen taking note of all that occurred that some files of the school records, schedules, blue prints, and data were stolen and that there was sign on the wall that said, “Chuck was here”.
After going to the doctors for a check up Fabio was heading home. The car trip couldn’t have been any longer even if they were carrying 200 elephants along with them. Fabio got a long lecture from his parents about what he had done (don’t know he’s a secret agent and still don’t either). His parents were questioning him why we was stupid enough to climb into the vents in the first place. He told them that he was surrounded by the fire from all sides and couldn’t escape so he went into the vents. Of course his dad could tell he was lieing because of the nervous twitch he got on his left eye ever time he lied. This just made them angrier and made his dad’s face turn into the color of a red jalapeno. He was grounded until Sunday after the weekend was over and today was only Friday.
Late at night he couldn’t go to sleep because he could thinking of nothing else but rather wonder what Chuck was up to and why he needed all the info. He thought to himself that the only thing that would get his mind off the subject was if he watched so T.V. As he was flipping through the channels on his brand new 32”, widescreen, Sony television he saw a news report on a robbery in a science lab of famous scientists hired to work on a project approximately 1 hour away from his house. They had found finger prints on a display case for a genius creation created by a group of the most intelligent scientists of our time. The device was called the Mind Boggler, which would allow scientists to study the brain pattern and apply or tweak they brain patterns in a way to sort of control them. Well temporarily.
Fabio jotted down all the possible links that could relate the three crimes. First, the scepter which he did research on and it was said that it would be used as the ultimate source of energy when powered by a ancient Egyptian crystal which could be found in the center of Egypt in the pyramid which has a symbol of the word “control” facing east. Then, there was the files of the school, well actually all the schools in the state once he can hack into the main frame. Finally, this mind pattern observer thing. We Google searched the Mind Boggler device and he said that scientists have been trying to operate it for years but never could harness enough power.
That’s when it all started making sense! Chuck was planning to use the Ancient Scepter to operate the Mind Boggler, but first get the crystal to power the scepter. One thing he couldn’t figure out was why would he need the school info and data and what does that have to do with anything in his plan?
Well no matter what he knew where Chuck would strike next, the ancient Egyptian tomb of the great Pharaoh Tu Tuk Tuk, and according to the site the doors only open when the light from the sun go directly through the limestone bird’s beak into the eye of the tomb which would be at 1:35 p.m. Only one problem, we was grounded!
He awoke early in the morning and followed his usual routine (even though it was a weekend) and all morning he was pleading to his mom to un-ground him just this time.
“Honey, you know if I let you off the hook this time you’re going to keep asking me from this point forward.” said his mom.
“No I won’t mom, just this one time pleeeaassssse!” said Fabio begging his mom in his most persuading voice and with a puppy dog look.
“No, honey and you have to stop asking me or we’ll double your grounding.” said his mom in a stricter tone.
“Fine then be that way!” he yelled and stomped all the way to his room.
“It’s time for my backup plan” said Fabio in a sneaky little whisper to himself.
He called his boss, Secret agent 006 only 1 number off from the big times, for a ride to the Egyptian pyramids using his Blackberry Pearl phone that his mom forgot to confiscate.
“Jump outside your window in t minus 10 seconds and a jet plane will catch you” said agent 006.
The plane arrived at the pyramids as fast as it takes a fish so swim around his bowl one time. They flight was so fast that Fabio eyes were as wide as his new widescreen TV and couldn’t blink. He was Chuck’s old rusty, messed up jet car there in front of the pyramid of Tu Tuk Tuk. He could recognize that old airplane/car anywhere. It had a bad purple paint coat that looked like a 3 year old colored because it wasn’t even fully painted. The left windows were broken and the wheels were a size to small for the figure of the car. The other remaining windows were too tinted, they bumper was dented, it had no license plate, and the backseats were missing and Fabio couldn’t help himself but laugh out hysterically at seeing that hunk of junk.
As Fabio barged into the pyramid as the glistening sun struck the eye of the tomb he say that Chuck had already managed to slip and slide past all the booby traps. As Chuck held the crystal in the air you could see the sine shine off of it creating a 3D rainbow across the room.
“It’s too late now little, short Fabio Dingler! I’ve already got the diamond!“ said Chuck sounding as if he said the whole thing in one breathe and was gasping for air.
Fabio’s eyebrows started to twitch. His muscles grew with anger, and his eyes starting bulging out to the size of a balloon. His hair stood up and his fingers curled up to make a fist, and with one fist in the air he yelled “No one calls me SHORT!!” whaled Fabio at the top of his lungs.
He starred up at Chuck now look at his scrawny hands and legs. They were so skinny you see the bones pop up out of them. His stomach was round but flabby with curly hair in his stomach. His black hair was short and greasy and looked like he never heard of a sting called shampoo.
Then Fabio leaped up like a ninja and tried to get the Mind Boggler machine, which looked to be fully assembled and working, out of his hands, but Chuck reacted and dodged the blow and stumbled over some stairs.
“It’s too late now Dingler! I will finally get you back for putting me in prison by making your school days to 360 days instead of 180!” he giggled after that remark to himself as he tried to make his escape.
“You evil fiend! What kind of maniac would do such a thing?!” Fabio snorted out.
Chuck threw his smoke screen as a distraction but it did not operate but hit Fabio in the head which slowed him down. Knowing this was his last chance to catch Chuck he threw his secret weapon…a cheese wheel he had been saving in his back pocket for the past 3 months. As he chucked the cheese at Chuck the wheel crashed and landed right in front of him and being as clumsy as ever Chuck tripped over the wheel and the stench knocked him unconscious for the next 3 hours. This gave the policemen enough time to arrest the evil villain and put him back in jail.
When Fabio returned home everyone had known what had happened and the whole world had seen what he had done for every kid in the state. He was rewarded with flowers and presents, and kisses from his mother. Sadly, Fabio had to retire afterwards because everyone knew his other identity but became the new Vice President of the agency and is know and will always be remembered in the G.O.A.T Hall of Fame!
Note: I had to rush the ending so if you could help me think of an ending that would be great =).
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